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       When I was alone and crying
       God was there
       When I was distraught and without hope
       God was there
       When they talked about me
       And made me feel worthless
       God was there
       When they called me stupid
       And said I wasn't good enough
       God was there
       
       God was there
       When I was alone
       And wanted to die
       God was there
       When no else was
       God was there
       When I had no one
       To call friend
       God was there
       When she died and left me
       Broken hearted
       God was there
       
       And He's still here
       He'll be there for you
       Just like He was for me
I think the poem speaks for itself.:D
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kempossible Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Artist
>3 it
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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justmeh123 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. :clap:
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, thank you. :bow:
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justmeh123 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. :3
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WolfKidz Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Very nice~! owo

~Rattata
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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Madscientist1234 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
I really adored this poem. And I was wondering if you'd let me do it at my speech for the youthies?
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, and yes, you can use it.
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Madscientist1234 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
Thanks so much for this. I had quite a lot of people step up when we asked people to accept him. I think the poem saved my devotion haha.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad I could help. God bless.
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Dragonguardian253 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is a very lovely poem.Whenever I look at this,it'll make me think of God whenever I'm in trouble or I feel like I'm trapped.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much.
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PirateGal4 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, this is so beautiful it makes me cry! :heart:
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. I cried when I wrote it. :D
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PirateGal4 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can understand why, it's wonderful!
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. I was crying tears of joy remembering where God had brought from.
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PirateGal4 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too; He saves us all every day. His mercy really is never ending, and His love unconditional. Realizing that...that moment when you realize just what God did for you, how much He loves us and how unworthy we are...it's the most humbling, beautiful, incredible feeling. It brings me to tears just thinking of it!:happycry:
Isn't a blessing to know the truth?
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amen. :nod:
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Sapphire-X-Dreams Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
Lovely story, and so very true. :D
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:iconsue-zan:
Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :hug:
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tsubame-33 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you for your words :huggle:
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :iconcuddleplz:
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Jennifer-Sawyer Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. This simple poem just helped me alot. Thank you for writing this. <3
I feel much better now.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's good, you're welcome.:D
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colorfusionable Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Student General Artist
beautiful :heart:
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!:D
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colorfusionable Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011  Student General Artist
no problem
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Mikisoq Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
That is great! ^^
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.:D
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Mikisoq Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
You are very welcome! ^^
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Yatai Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011
OH! I also have an imaginary friend! She's called Saphira.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, but God's not imaginary. He is my friend and He's real.
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goodbyebluemonday43 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
god is dead.
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:iconsue-zan:
Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No, He's not.
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goodbyebluemonday43 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
prove it.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What kind of proof are you looking for?
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goodbyebluemonday43 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Anything.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Look at the world in general. With all these disasters and unexplainable happenings, do you REALLY think that humans are in full command?
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goodbyebluemonday43 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
All the disasters are because of man's irresponsibility. Everything has to come from something. Nothing just appears out of an abyss. The christian creaiton myth just doesn't make sense.
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What do YOU believe then?
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shivagirl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw....... x3 x3 this poem speaks the right words... its so beutifull ..... :3 ... at first i thought it would be a waste of time if i pasted by and read it, but now i took my time.....and it made my day.... :3 im not so much into stuff like these, but i meant something this time..... any how... its so pretty..... x3 x3 x3 x3 °im sorry for my english....=3 i speak spanish....so if if mess up..please tell me ,ill help alot.....x3 x3
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for taking time out to read it.:hug:
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shivagirl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aw.... your kidding..:3 it was nice to read it.... X3 X3
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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shivagirl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
=3
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FpvOoOo Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
God was there ,here and He always will be

nice writing :heart:
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Sue-Zan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.:aww:
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FpvOoOo Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
u r welcome :aww:
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XxGretchenxX Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Why are these stupid people hating on this poem? So what, the artist believes in God, get over it. Don't ridicule their ideas just because you don't believe in them, that's what's wrong with society today, people being intolerant of EVERYTHING.

Great poem, by the way
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